World of Warcraft (WoW) currently has approximately 11.5 million subscribers; over half of the population of Australia, and the average player usually plays about seventeen hours per week. When you average that out an average player spends around two and a half hours in a day on WoW. This may not seem like a problem, but these are the average players. The problem with online gaming comes from the individuals that spend ninety plus hours in a week playing WoW. The health and psychological effects of excessive game play that stem from Wow are fast becoming more of an issue in today’s society; starvation, depression and neglecting real life are some of the most common issues that stem from excessive play on WoW.
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Very good, I think after subscribers you could use a colon instead of a semicolon and avoid the use of you in the second sentence. The second to last WoW is missing a cap, but nicely written introduction.
ReplyDeleteIn most of my essays I use we and you a lot to refer to the reader. Now that this class is almost over I've learned that we should use as readers, individuals, or viewers instead from chelsie. This is interesting though and makes me want to read on about WoW and gamers.
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